Sometimes a love song is dazed and confused!
I heard G_D made a woman to balance me, when I get mad, did G_D give that woman the right to know me beyond that. To take from my anger to take when I’m cruel to know with ingenuity my weakness when I’m cool. I heard G_D made a woman that knows me too, may be that’s why its heaven. blissful in the night when we talk, chaos when we screw. Chaos when we screw. So much for a madam, so much for anything that’s new. Who needs fake Teflon, when I got you? I’ll take what I have, because it’s better than good, and deeper dreams do come true. I’m listening to Jimmy Page while I look at you, over twenty-six years I’ve been looking at sweet you.
When the wind came down, chords falling, octave after octave, oh we hurt, like we never thought we could. Vows in light, real life in darkness, everything is suddenly round not square, not like the good book said. Jimmy’s playing his bow, oh the devil plays a bow, like lightning can strike a man’s soul. Children we got children, better than gold, better than pretty, we look at each other what are we going to do. They look so much like me, they look so much like you, what’s to imagine, I heard G_D made a woman, looks like that G_D made a man too. What we have here is a puzzle, what we have is me and you, oh, oh, oh, so sweet is life, when I’m dazed and confused. Sometimes a love song is dazed and confused.
I heard an overture, a dream, then I heard G_D made a woman to balance me. She stepped right on each loosed strand, each bow string off Jimmy Page’s hand. And I climbed an illusion that was hidden in me, the difference between me and Jimmy is I had her with me. For I saw the old man, she saw him too, and she told me, unlike that old man, I am going to make you be you. Go on now and play. Sometimes a love song is dazed and confused.
And we love for such a long time, for such a long time, while Jimmy plays, yes while Jimmy plays.
I heard G_D made a woman to balance me, when I am old, did G_D give that woman the right to know me beyond that. To take all I had taken and let me take it right back. To push me further, then I ever could push back, to push me further, then I ever could push back. I’m listening to Jimmy Page while I look at you, over twenty-six years I’ve been looking at sweet you. 05.25.18- דָּנִיֵּאל
When Jimmy plays was hot! 😉 I listened to the entire Dazed and Confused clip while reading very slowly through your post. The wow factor was definitely there. ❤
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Hi Abigail, Thank you, that is what I was hoping for, somebody to listen as they read. That is the way it was written. 😉
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That is the way it was read. A wonderful post Daniel. ❤
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I could hear page playing and plant singing. A nice love song really. I believe you even captured the blues sufficiently.
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Thank you Darrin, I wanted to write something that I pictured while listening to the song. You give me great hope that I succeeded.
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Certainly you did, you write in pictures at least for me that is how I interpret it. Great talent you have.
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R&R rhyme on erotic terms. Loved this. ❤
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Thank you Jamie, the only way to understand Zeppelin. I appreciate your comment. 😉
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😉 it is, it is…
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🙂 This piece was a nice way to set off the weekend with my wife Daniel.
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Thank you Dallas, that comment makes my day, or night as the case may be. Blessings for you and your missus on the Dazed and Confused highway.
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Your welcome Daniel, most of the time it is confusing, I would not be surprise if most great relations are! 😉
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It was all very Zepplin like, but I really loved this line the most. “I heard an overture, a dream, then I heard G_D made a woman to balance me. “
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Hi Ginger, I am happy you liked this piece and especially the quote you pulled. Thank you for your wonderful comment.
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Very welcome Daniel,! 🙂
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Well done sir, the cadence is perfect, the words soul deep. I would say Jimmy would be proud. 😉
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Thank you Alex, I really appreciate that. I am happy that I was able to hold the cadence. 😉
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Daniel I have been waiting for this brand of a masterpiece from you for a while. Your words balance the music nicely, and could easily be replacement lyrics. (Especially during the instrumentals) well done my friend, well done.
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Thank you very much Mr. Bartholamez, although you have given me fanciful compliments before, perhaps none mean so much to me as this one. 😉
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My pleasure Daniel, please know anything I put down I fell is well deserved. 🙂
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Fantastic words and song Daniel. I remember the “Song Remains the Same” well spent many of a dazed moment of my own listening to it. 🙂
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Thank you for your comment. Perhaps you listened to the song the way it was supposed to be heard. 😉
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Your words will be scrolling through my head the rest of the day, while listening to the intro deep deep beats of Dazed and Confused. ❤
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Hi Summer, Thank you for your comment. I love the intro beat to this song. Great minds and all that.
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Yes I will agree to the great minds, but you are probably over doing it for mine. 😉 Your welcome Daniel. 🙂 ❤
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Hammer of the Gods mate, this was an incredible write.
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Thank you Shaun, no group was so aptly named as Zeppelin was with “Hammer of the G_Ds. I appreciate your kind remark.
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Legends they are mate, I still enjoy their music immensely.
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Hi Daniel,
Of course I am going to like this. Your alternative lyrics as I like to refer to them are wild. I did as others have done and read during the Bow part. Incredible! ❤
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Thank you Karen, yes I did think you would like this. 😉 I love the bow part on this tune, so happy my words matched with what you heard.
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Daniel I was fortunate to get to see Jimmy Page live, a number of years ago. He was fantastic, and has that special instinctive talent that so few rockers have. Your piece was made for Jimmy’s playing! ❤
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This is incredible Daniel. I love it, like an alternative lyric that goes so well with the rhythm and the mood of the song. You write the blues and Rock and roll well. 😉 ❤
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Thank you Elizabeth. I really appreciate your comment. This was another one I wasn’t real sure on, but hearing your affirmations helps. 🙂
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It works that way for me as well on anything in life, I doubt and someone affirms and there I go. 🙂
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This was a fascinating take off on a favorite Zeppelin song of mine. One tends to think of love songs before the knot is tied, your version twenty-six years on is commendable. Congratulations to you both. ❤ ❤ ❤
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Thank you Qwen, I appreciate you saw between the lines on this. I can also appreciate that your a Zeppelin fan. Thank you for your kind congratulations, I am so happy you liked this.
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very unusual and very well done, rock on Daniel! 😉
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Thank you King, happy you liked this. Rock on yourself kind sir. 😉
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Your welcome Daniel, as NY say’s “Rocking in the real world”. 😉
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This was different, and at first I tried to read it without listening to the song, and I found your words memerizing, but once I heard the song, I understood your words even more. Great writing.
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Hi Bettina, Thank you for your wonderful comment. I am happy you found the words mesmerizing. I often write to music for inspiration, and so it is always thrilling to me when someone bonds the words with the song I wrote too.
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The thing is I could hear/sing your words with “Dazed and Confused, that was wild. 😉
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Dear Daniel, Such words are these that you have written that I cannot stop going over them in my mind. I had not been the greatest Led Zeppelin fan, that has changed. 😉 ❤ Ruby
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Hi Ruby, not the greatest Led fan, well I am happy that has changed, and I would imagine you already feel better now that it has. 😉 Thank you for your comment. It made my day. Daniel
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You have a great influence over me 😉 use it wisely. ❤
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🙂 oh I will.
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I usually speak my own words in comments, but have to quote this from yours, like any long year’d married chap should. “What we have here is a puzzle, what we have is me and you, oh, oh, oh, so sweet is life, when I’m dazed and confused. Sometimes a love song is dazed and confused.”
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Thank you Stafford, I always suspected a bit of romance in you. 😉
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Daniel, I’m rough around the edges but a bit of a fluff bear inside. 😉
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Loved the words to this Daniel, a raw sound just like the blues, went together so well with the song. I had to listen and watch all 28 minutes. 😉 ❤
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Hi Deb, it is a pretty long clip but well worth the listen, and I am happy that you did sit through it. Thank you for your kind compliment. Wishing you a great week ahead.
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welcome Daniel. Listening to “Dazed and Confused” as I return your message again. 🙂
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❤ this!!!
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Thank you Jerri, so happy that you liked it. 🙂
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🙂 Your Welcome!
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Daniel, your words were incredible, the hard times and the good times associated in a true relationship displayed to the music of Led Zeppelin. I would like to see more!<3
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Thank you Raquel, hard times good times, does sound like Led Zeppelin lyrics I suppose. 😉 Thank you as always for reading and your wonderful comments.
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Always welcome… 🙂
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Dear Daniel, you entered the Houses of the Holy, and you added words to one of my favorite Zeppelin tunes. It is almost spiritual how your words match Jimmy’s playing in the song. This was a great fun read. You consistently amaze me. 😉 ❤ ❤ ❤
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Hi Heather. Thank you so much. Houses is actually a favorite Zeppelin album of mine. I am happy you liked this and I am happy it happens to be a favorite Zeppelin song of yours. Shavua tov, Daniel
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Hi Daniel, I have always been a big Zep fan, so naturally anything involving their music I love. Shalom, Heather
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Wow, this is good Daniel! Words used well!
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Thank you Steve, happy you liked this. Always thrilled when the words catch on. 😉
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Happens with most of yours Daniel, occasionally one out of my depth which is not unusual but I like them all anyway. 😉
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“blissful in the night when we talk, chaos when we screw. Chaos when we screw” Loved this line.
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Favorite of mine as well. 😉 Typical guy I suppose. Thank you Lora for your comment. Have a great week.
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Yes Daniel very guy like, but it’s okay. 🙂 Wishing you a great week as well.
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Big smile.
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Smiles back to you….:)
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A very sumptuous write, Daniel. If gowns were made of words, this could be a gown…. and a tuxedo!
PS:
First time I ever smoked pot, this was playing. I was truly dazed and confused.
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Hi Resa, That is truly a sensational compliment. May be a Zeppelin gown after the Whitby Gown. ??? 😉 A small confession to make my dear friend, I was known to be hazed and confused in the early days when I listened to Dazed and Confused as well. 😉
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LOL!
Hey the new Art Gown is posted! I’m a bit behind in answering comments, but hope to catch up tonight. It looks like this Art Gown is going to be in a magazine!
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Okay I looked at your new gown. That is genius my friend. I will be promoting and blasting out praise soon. 😊😎
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