“We are all ready to be savage in some cause. The difference between a good man and a bad one is the choice of the cause.” – William James
The ending of a Sabbath for a gentle man. The signs and the lessons for a gentle man. The sun rises and sets on the gentle man. When the day arrives and I seem to die, play Led Zeppelin over me. For not in a grave I will ever be. From the beginning to what is to be…
A gentle man’s immortality.
A gentle man dances in the dark, behind a curtain, oh his mind is stark, thinking not on that which brings forth love, nor does he even consider if the sun will rise above. For that gentle man thinks of worlds to be. Has he done what is right to blend a destiny? For to care outside of self is instinctual not, to hold hearts close, where they are not tied in knots. Yes, that gentle man moves with not much ease, for a train calls a sound from his inward prairie. Indeed, a gentle man is not sweet or good, baring strong sentiments of what most think he should. Not a great cut figure drawn is he, still a gentle man will he be.
There’s a mirror chained in deep waters on a ghostly sea, it reflects certain attributes a gentle mind can free. Without strength or power, or ghastly deeds, moving strong cogs of iron through ocean reeds. A gentle man can breathe, can breathe with belief, part the water of doubt with ease. Indeed, there are moments of immobility, when movement unexpected changes everything, and a gentle man looks to find someone holding a key, someone that is a she. That someone is a she.
The world becomes full of whispers for the gentle man, caressing private moments in places that he thought he would never understand. Movement in a symphony a chart of notes, a minor key in sixteen rhythms on his weakening knees. A monotone turned to a stereo vision. Six pointed seals of such mysteries. An entrance given for the mind that was not living, a thought becomes a decision. Suddenly there is something slight, a spark or two in one for the gentle man. And yes, he sees, for the rest of his life with clarity. Only the beginnings, the very depth of gentleness is G_D’s vision for he. A gentle man he will be. A gentle man he will be.
But then, and then….
The rains come down, and the war does start, and the sky turns ghastly with unimagined art. From the day well given for the night has come, and the rebel man yells, give us your father’s and your sons. Comes the battle for many, is there a man not even one? There are terrible instincts in lives of men, when their nature is built on the greed of sin, turning each woman till she can’t be turned again. For the culture rages, and it sums its end, saying there is no redemption needed for we will always win.
But give me no prophet, or new age spin. Just a sword blessed by G_D and a gentle man.
The ending of a Sabbath for a gentle man. The signs and the lessons for a gentle man. The sun rises and sets on the gentle man. When the day arrives and I seem to die, play Led Zeppelin over me. For not in a grave I will ever be. From the beginning to what is to be…
A gentle man’s immortality. – 06.23.2019 – דָנִיֵּאל
If I am there, I will make sure Led Zeppelin is played!
If you are here, play Janis & Jimi for me.
Alyona’s version of The immigrant song is fabulous.
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Well of course! 🙂 Alyona rocks! 🙂
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Love the gentle guys, they are the best warriors, and this did read wonderful, as if you had been listening to hours of LZ. ❤ ❤ ❤
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Thank you Heather. I had been listening to hours of LZ, getting the Led out if that’s possible. 😉
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Rock on my spiritual brother, rock on! 🙂 ❤
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Immortal and invincible my gentle friend. This was most excellent!!!
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Thank you Scott, it was a whim of a piece born in 15 minutes time, and I am still thinking if it is up to my personal standards. 😉
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Its very good. Tell the little voice to go away. 😉
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Done! 🙂
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🙂 Go man go.
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Go with me. 😉
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Shavua tov my brother. The depth of this is incredible. Apocalyptic yes, but perhaps our future. Well done. Shalom, Den
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Thank you Dennis. For once I went against better judgement and published something, so I am thrilled that you like it. Shavua Tov my friend.
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It is a fine piece my brother. It shows a different side of you. A gentle side. Shalom, Den
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Thank you Dennis.
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Hammer of the GDs. 🙂 For the gentle man. This is great.
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Thank you Raquel. The hammer has a nice feel to it. 😉 Happy you liked this.
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Your welcome Daniel. Not only do you write well but you have great taste in music. 🙂
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Fabulous, gentle men are a necessity in this day and time. Your words ring with truth.
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Thank you Lynette I appreciate your comment. I agree gentle men are needed in this day and time.
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I have taught my sons this, and they have grown up to be great men. 🙂
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This is such a intriguing piece Daniel, and although you might have your doubts (I did read other comments 😉 ) it is one of your best.
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Hi Jane, I am happy you read the comments. 🙂 and I thank you very much for your kind support.
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Anytime! 🙂
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This is wonderful, Daniel and Alyona singing is a perfect fit.
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Thank you Tella for your comment, and I agree Alyona has a great set of pipes.
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Daniel, you are on a roll this week. I agree totally with your thoughts expressed here. A gentle soul is always one of courage and strength. It is for this world we live in the only hope for survival. Bill
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Thank you Bill, I agree very much with everything you said. Coming from a gentle man such as yourself it makes me know we will survive. 🙂
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Gentle to some, not so much to others, but I appreciate you saying it just the same. 😉
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Dear Daniel,
Your “Gentle Man” piece is brilliant, and yes it most certainly reads like the best of a Led Zeppelin tune. What a gift you have.
❤
Ruby
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Thank you Ruby, My apologies for the delayed response. I am actually very thrilled by your compliment. 😉
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😉 No problem with the delay, you are very welcome. ❤
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Daniel I wish I had the patience to be a gentle man. Having now consumed your fine writing I think it might be beyond my reach. Still I will try. 🙂
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Thats all one can ask Ryan. 😉 Actually I think you have a lot more going for you on the gentle side than you admit to. Still as always I thank you my friend for your comment.
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Could be I am the proverbial “lamb in wolves clothing”. 😉
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What a continued amazing journey your writing leads me on. I am meditating lately on the art of being gentle. Your words have now put a mystical tinge into my thoughts that will no doubt help. Thank you.
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Hi Wang, thank you for your great comment. I am humbled to be a part of your meditation workout if even in a minor way. 😉 Wishing you a great week my friend.
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There are many things I read I meditate on, but your blog offers me many thoughts and ideas to think on, which I appreciate. 🙂
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Good stuff Daniel. I enjoyed very much.
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Thank you Dallas, really happy you liked this.
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Incredible thoughts. You have a gift for writing. The music was great too.
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Thank you Jade for reading and commenting. I am happy you liked this. I really liked the cover of the Zeppelin song too.
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Hi Daniel,
I like the knight theme, the good guy, the quiet man, the gentle man. Your writing as always leaves me with much food for thought. Thank you. Darrin
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Hi Darrin. Thank you for your warm and very kind comment. I am humbled when somebody tells me my writing gives them something. Thanks again.
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Amazing. ❤ this.
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Thank you Amy, so happy you liked it and commented. 🙂
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Daniel this is really about being a warrior, at least the way I interpret it. The calmness, the gentleness and understanding of what it takes to win in lifes battles. Your wording is genius.
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Thank you Lauren, I think you are correct, My wife and I have a wonderful friend who is the essence of a gentle man. He always said, “Don’t mistake manners for weakness”. I think that is basically your point as well.
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Sounds like a wise man! 😉
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Your writing style is fascinating and powerful, Daniel. I really enjoyed this post.
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Hi Roberta, Thank you for your very kind comment. I am happy you enjoyed this post, and took the time to read and comment on it.
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Unbelievable prose my friend. The knighthood theme, or the fisher-king keeps handing out dividends to you my friend that I personally gain from reading your writing. Thank you.
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Wow thank you Steve, I am humbled by your comment. I as you know am a fan of the fisher-king, so you hit my button with that comment. 😉
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The Fisher-king attitude rocks my friend as does Led Zeppelin. 🙂
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Susc a wonderful bit of writing dearest Daniel. Each piece better than the one before. 🙂 ❤
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Thank you Lisa, very kind of you to say so. I appreciate you always reading and commenting on my work. 🙂
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Always my pleasure. 🙂 ❤
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You are at your best with this one mate. I like the turn around at the end. No doubt who the victor will be in that conflict. 😉
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Thank you Shaun, you always give me a great insight into what you read. I very much appreciate it. 🙂
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Very welcome mate!
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I really like this… it seems to find a place in the sou… like a soft breeze to bring ease among humanity
all in the gentle man part he brings to this moment in time…I think you are such a man Daniel…
Blessings
mary
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Thank you Mary, so very kind of you to say. Wishing you a great week ahead. Daniel
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and I wish the same for you 🙂
mary
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