Photo courtesy National Park Service Bryce Canyon
From we to I and back to me. I entered this canyon at night to see, what Henry David Thoreau, wrote by his hand freely. His words rang through my memory. “It’s not what you look at that matters, it’s what you see”.
Draw breath from here this spring filled life, by flowing river so wild in tide that moves from rock and drowns some too. Thin air that forces a mind of good. Take now thy fault that has grown so cold that guilty conscience of seeds so old, and throw it forward beneath this wash, let foamy waters take now it all. Come forward sky; drop now Gibbous Moon, let sounds nearby now vanish soon. Bring forth the ghost that hold my soul, let them drown knowing I gave them all. Let sin go now beneath my feet in this crazy water on to the sea. Old things made new, from what can be, arise in gladness, harmony.
Impale the blame that holds defeat, O tall slender pines these spikes of trees. That gather branches held in three’s, that root this canyon from all unseen. This eco-system overgrown holds spells of craft of old-time dreams, of spirits gone beyond our view, a sudden chill passes understood. For what is called from up above these rocky walls, echoes align, to bring this man by this cold stream, to swear to cleanse, and know the sheen. Thou shine above from that cold moon, Shekinah earth of lower womb, and cast my way into this stream, let all creation of creator sing. About me here where deer would stay, comes flowing ribbons in G_Ds own name. For night has come it is understood, I summon circles for what I would.
Draw breath from here this spring filled life; a baptized man would dry his eyes. For magic comes with what we do, in streams of old, in modern woods. To let go pain in canyons deep, to rise to G_D whom with we speak. From we to I and back to me, the womb of canyon the ark I seek. So, through a pathway over grown, I walked in June to find my home. I followed down by rocks and trees, while unseen spirits guarded me.
From we to I and back to me. I entered this canyon at night to see, what Henry David Thoreau, wrote by his hand freely. His words rang through my memory. “It’s not what you look at that matters, it’s what you see”. – 06.06.2018 – דָנִיֵּאל
This was beautiful writing.
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Thank you Alice, I appreciate your comment. Welcome to my blog.
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Thank you, for your welcome, I enjoy what I have read so far. 🙂
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“I find it wholesome to be alone the greater part of the time. To be in company, even with the best, is soon wearisome and dissipating. I love to be alone. I never found the companion that was so companionable as solitude.”
― Henry David Thoreau, 😉 ❤ your post, made me think instantly of the above a favorite Thoreau quote of mine.
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Hi Erin, Thank you for sharing the quote with me, it is also a favorite of mine, as most of Thoreau’s work is. I am happy you enjoyed the post, Thanks again. Daniel
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Your welcome. I am presently reading “Henry David Thoreau: A Life” by Laura Walls, I would recommend it highly. 🙂 ❤
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Thank you Erin I will check into it.
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Daniel, this is amazing. There is the common deep spiritual and philosophical lines that one might find in Thoreau’s writing. You have entered into a pact with your surroundings and found GD. Brilliant!
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Thank you Jerri, I am appreciative of your kind compliment on my writing. I am striving to be at ease with my surrounds no matter where. Sometimes that in itself can be a challenge don’t you think. 😉
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Hi Daniel always a challenge especially when one is surrounded by the day to day noise of life.
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I enjoyed this post very much Daniel. A lot of detailed lines weaving together the images and philosophies all of which I agree with by the way. One cannot help but feel minuscule when face to face with the grandeur of nature. Very well done my friend.
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Thank you Steve, I appreciate your kind words. Your words on “feeling minuscule when coming face to face with the grandeur of nature”, I could not agree with more. Have a great day my friend.
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Always a pleasure Daniel! 🙂
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Daniel I got chills reading this. You have such a classic sound to it, and by far my favorite line is “From we to I and back to me.” 🙂 ❤
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Hi Summer, Thank you for your comment, I am happy you liked this piece. “From we to I and back to me.” for me was a circle, how did it seem to you? 🙂
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Daniel I saw it as a circle a round identifying with the we, moving to the I and then all learned becoming a part of me. That was my interpretation. 😉
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Daniel I often have new favorites when you write, but “The Canyon by Night” will no doubt be an enduring favorite even as new post come along. The self revelations in your writings often strike me, but none so as here, where you bring yourself into the holy of nature. Bravo author.
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Thank you Lynette for your most kind comment. I am glad this is a favorite for you, for perhaps the thoughts involved in it fit you all the most. Wishing you the best of the day ahead.
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Your welcome Daniel. Your assumption would be correct, and I thank you for it. Assumption perhaps insight.
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Well written poem Daniel, I enjoyed it, found myself wanting to take a hike up a canyon suddenly. 😉
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Thank you King for your comment. You would be most welcome anytime to join me for that hike, good company is always a desire. 😉
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Hi Daniel, I found myself reading this piece more than once, and reading it as I do many of your writings as a psalm. It was beautiful! ❤
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What a wonderful compliment Lisa. Thank you very much.
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🙂 Your welcome Shabbat shalom Daniel. 🙂 ❤
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Daniel, The Canyon at Night was a great poem, the words are still reverberating in me. I love that particular quote from Thoreau, and your words in self-reflection were perfect surrounding it.
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Thank you Wang, I appreciate your kind compliment. Wishing you a great weekend my friend. 🙂
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Daniel this was wonderful, my favorite line, “Take now thy fault that has grown so cold that guilty conscience of seeds so old, and throw it forward beneath this wash, let foamy waters take now it all.”…Fantastic writing. Thank you.
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Hi Destiny, Thank you for your kind words. Sometimes words mean more than others when written. I think you pinned these right. 😉
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Daniel you have done “Thoreau” well here. Growing up a few miles from Walden my dad would often take us to visit the site of Henry Thoreau’s cabin. It is such a peaceful place, and I can only imagine you in the Canyonlands feeling that same spirit and having the courage to invite it inside. ❤
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Hi Qwen, Thank you for sharing that memory with me, it sounds like very special times indeed. I am also appreciative of your compliment. I strive for that courage, and often fail, but I like the sound of it. 😉
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Your welcome Daniel, they were very special times, and so many lessons from that time period have stayed with me having to do with an appreciation of nature. As to your courage perhaps no striving is needed. 😉
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Brillant as that moon and spirit you know and follow! 🙂
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Thank you Alex, the moon even if it is a Gibbous moon is often bright in the canyon. 😉 Thank you for your comment.
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My favorite phase Daniel, I have the impression something new is about to happen during that Gibbous moon. 😉
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Letting go of all negative things, letting shame drown in the waters of what makes us whole. That is what I received from this wonderful writing Daniel. Thank you. ❤
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Hi Lauren, as usual you hit the point right on. Thank you for your wonderful comment. Wishing you a great weekend.
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Thank you Daniel. Wishing you a wonderful weekend as well! 🙂
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Dear Daniel, now you have written a true favorite for me, although it is in competition with many other writings you have. The philosophy of letting go of this worlds swage that would depress and hold you in such wonderful surroundings and finding yourself, is beautiful. We are not objects we are spirits at least that is what I read into this. Thank you. ❤ Ruby
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Hi Ruby, Apologies for such a late reply. I thank you for such a wonderful comment. I wonder at times why it is so hard to let go of those things which weigh us down. It is our j=choice to do so after all. I think you read this right. Happy it is a new favorite for you. Daniel
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No problem dear Daniel. The draw to negativity in each of us seems to be a trait I admit, but that draw never last. 🙂 ❤ Ruby
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My dear brother, I read “The Canyon at Night”, and was enthralled with the depth you put on display of the spirit truly being made free from those bonds that hold it earthward. The loosening of bonds to be one with your creator. Amen. It is as you have written. With respect, your brother, Den
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Thank you brother, I appreciate your kind comment. True you nailed it, it is a great life goal to loosen those bonds, and to reach the true blessing of Hashem. To know him. I am glad we are going on this journey together. Daniel
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Right here with you on that Daniel! Forward we go into that canyon, and it is a beauty!! 🙂 “To know him” (Fabulous)
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I have always cherished HDT writings Daniel, his thoughts on natural history and the environment, his political philosophy on civil disobedience for a just cause, and his personal relationship with the world around him. I think many of your writings reflect the same discourse as his. This was a masterpiece in my opinion. I thank you for it. Bill
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You have honored me greatly Bill. Thank you. I too am a fan of HDT his writings and thoughts hold principals that I long to emulate. Thank you for your kind compliments Bill, once again I am very honored and humbled.
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As I said before Daniel many of your writings remind me of Thoreau’s writings. Your welcome my young friend.
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Daniel, many of the lines I found wonderful in this post have already been quoted again, so I shall simply tell you, I would quote the whole post as every part seemed relevant to me. The shedding of conscience burdens into the nature that is provided to us by Hashem, you have captured wonderfully here. I would say this is a new favorite but I know more are to come. ❤
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Hi Heather, I like how you put that and I shall quote it back to you, “the shedding of conscience burdens into the nature that is provided to us by Hashem”. I believe you might have more writer in you than you think. 😉 Thank you. Shavua tov my friend.
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Dearest Daniel, even I can get a good quote out now and then, but a writer I will never unfortunately be. Shavua Tov ❤ Heather
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Well done Daniel, always the best prose of the day when you publish in my opinion. 😉
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Thank you Stafford. I do appreciate your reading and your nice compliment. 🙂
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This was magical Daniel, like a smooth dream and the best example of that is the following from your post which I quote, “Draw breath from here this spring filled life; a baptized man would dry his eyes. For magic comes with what we do, in streams of old, in modern woods. To let go pain in canyons deep, to rise to G_D whom with we speak” Thank you. ❤
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Thank you Jane, I appreciate your kind words I am humbled when people like my work and really humbled when they quote it back, but more than humbled I am thrilled they like it. Thank you again.
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Very welcome! 🙂
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Beautiful Daniel! ❤ ❤ ❤
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Thank you Raquel, I am happy you liked this. 🙂
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Your welcome Daniel, as you know the Southwest post are my favorites! 🙂
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Daniel you have taken me on another trip into that rarefied air that you breath in your spirit and grace and exhale back in the form of words from a spirit that helps to enhance your readers life if they listen. I know I have. Thank you.
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Hi Darrin, Thank you, I like how you put that, the rarefied air, I hope you will allow me to use that phrase at some point. Thanks again my friend..
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Please use away Daniel, I value that rarefied air myself. 😉
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Your forays into the woods or in your case the western lands are filled with the best symbols of the human spirits interaction with his creator. I enjoyed this my friend. Keep up the great writing. 🙂
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Thank you Ryan, I appreciate your comment. Those symbols of the human spirit interacting with my creator keep me going and knowing your fascinating story I know they keep you going as well. Thank you for having shared it with me.
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Very true Daniel, without those times to rely on the reality of what I think to be true would often be in doubt. Those symbols have ridden their way with me through some rough times. 😉
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I adored this, for many reasons, but personally the quote you used from Thoreau said it all, “It’s not what you look at that matters, it’s what you see”. Your writing always inspires me. ❤
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Thank you Abigail, I love that quote from Thoreau, I think it might be my favorite. Thank you for your wonderful comment, I am thrilled my writing inspires you. 🙂
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Your welcome, I look forward and enjoy each post you write.
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This is incredible…!!!
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Thank you Bettina, I appreciate your reading and commenting on my writing. 🙂
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My pleasure. 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Your writing is interesting, a pleasant surprise in a sea of prose on personal discontent. Perhaps it all streams from “the thin air that causes a mind of good”. I will be back for more.
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Hi Robin, welcome to my blog, very nice to have you here, and I do appreciate your comment. The thin air does lead to happiness I think, either that or fewer brain cells. 😉 Thanks again. 🙂
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LOL, that is funny, thank you for your welcome, I will be returning many times. 🙂
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The magic in this piece is your writing, Daniel.
Sew, I am tired, and I saw the line as “what you sew”, not “what you see”
Nonetheless, I take the Whitby in me, and from me to you to Su (san) I say… It’s some beautiful prose, a gibbous moon and a canyon away!
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Thank you Resa, I think we see what we need to, I imagine you are tired, that last gown is so beautiful, your magic takes a lot of energy, do rest up fair lady you deserve it. A gibbous moon and an enchanting creation will come your way soon enough. 😉
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