{Abstract} In which “The Whitby Ladies” being playful and gay, go by carriage to Leeds to attend the performance of Hérodiade at the “Grand Playhouse”. In which the ladies by craft, divine a bargain with a spright hereby named Baphomet to deal for the soul of the actress “Simone Lazarre” in exchange for the soul of the Archbishop of Canterbury “Edward White Benson” who is in attendance.
“Some whisper holy, holy, but they lie. Some cry rapture sweet Pontifex Maximus, but they do not know. I lie in the secret places, where the wolves eat their meat, and I wait for the calling of my Lord.” – DS
She burns her soul on the wood filled stage. With the walls of paper where the structure of Jerusalem weighs. The balance of acts, on a judgment scale, her breast displayed, as a wishing well. Her chocolate curls fall the room does sway and spins out of control far away. Those eyes so fair that watch above, in all their lust of lovers loved, in dresses made by magic care they watch Salome dance naked bare. Oh, night so quiet in summers dusk, all ladies present breathing touch. In marionette form, they move each thrust of naked hips that bring men’s lust. From Whitby town they made their way by carriage up the queen’s highway to sit as perched as royalty does, to move the characters, as they must. In Leeds Grand room, they play to test mortality’s cusp, a skin so soft for the Baptist bloody bust.
An act in parts, a shadow of life, the ballast moves from the deep of the night. The heat, the heat some barrister cries his eyes on the dancer and her glistening thighs. “Come all who hear, for none can see”, whispers one wicked witch in the gallery. Go on, go on reveal what will, a black bird is flying round the ceiling still. Can she never end says a barmaid dark? What I would not give a Pound to have her hips of art, as the dance for Hérodiade brings a bargain in the dark. Brings a trade before a part.
She burns her soul on the wood filled stage. With the veils breathing forms all around her, face. The room it breaths transposed only the silent can trace, with each witch watching the bargain take place. For the spright has promised to release one fair, to give the gift of trading while she dances there. An eye for an eye and a tooth or two, and such a supple body twisted as her soul comes through. Oh, the dark spirit watches right by the door for it has spotted a vessel what it traded for.
For Salome dances in the play for Leeds, before the royal bishop from Canterbury. His eyes they follow each miniscule move of a turning breast of the entrance to her womb. “Yes”, he’s heard to whisper, it is not enough for he wants to trap her dancing till she’s had enough, and the wicked things he has done before to dancing women to dancing whores. For he never would imagine that above his world in a gallery of witches there is a deal explored. For as the veils fall one by one and the lights grow dim and the dancer is done. The holy, holy Vicar looks confused to see a ghostly apparition with a silver tray, with no breath he will say. “This ends this way”, yes sir, “this end this way”! – 05.10.2018 – דָּנִיֵּאל
For me and the deals I have struck!
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Thank you! 🙂
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And of course I love it, anything Whitby gets my attention! ❤ Ruby
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Hi Ruby, most things Whitby grab my attention too. 🙂 Thank you my friend for your loyal reading and wonderful comments. I look forward to them.
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Keep the Whitby Ladies stories coming Daniel. I love each one. ❤
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Loved this Daniel, a little bit of history and magic, and of course the sexy Whitby Ladies. ❤
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Hi Ariel, Happy you liked this piece, I think history and magic go together, and a little bit of sexiness doesn’t bother me either. 😉 Thank you for your kind comment.
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It is a good combination, I often wonder where your ideas come from? This post being no exception to that curiosity of course. 😉
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I am not sure where the ideas come from Ariel. Perhaps a lazy mind always wondering about things instead of working. 😉
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I don’t think your thoughts come from a lazy mind. Just sayin! 😉
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The Whitby Ladies and Wovenhand fabulous! 🙂
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I love Wovenhand, discovered they were out of Denver nearby and was stoked about that. Thank you for your kind comment, happy you liked the post.
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Your welcome. They have a great sound, almost ethereal. The melody of the song goes well with your words.
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I am not surprised to see the Whitby Ladies crossing paths with Salome, it somehow fits. 😉 A great story Daniel. Loved it. ❤ 🙂
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Thank you Jane, I admit its a little bit of a reach but I had to attempt it anyway. I am thrilled you liked it. As always I appreciate you reading and your comments.
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Your reach was successful Daniel, and your welcome. I am ready for the next edition.
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Daniel this is a brilliant and a little twisted story and I love it. I looked up the Archbishop, a real guy apparently and a member of the Ghost Society. How fitting. Another favorite for me. ❤
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Hi Heather, it is a little twisted isn’t it. Yes the Archbishop was a real character, so happy you looked him up. I would like to think the rest of the characters are real as well. 😉 At least in my head. Thank you for your comment my friend. Shalom, Daniel
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I am certain of the authenticity of all the characters, and yes it is plain to see that there is some twisted thought involved here, but it is for the better good of the story. 😉 ❤
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And the better good is what one must strive for. 😉
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Well they should! 😉
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The best of what I have come to expect from the Whitby women and sexy very, very sexy!!! 🙂
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Thank you Tabby, never sexy enough though. 😉 Seriously the Whitby women thank you.
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This was a great read Daniel, the context, the bargain, the rhyme and the words inside the words. Steamy too. Well done!
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Hi Wang, thank you. To tell the truth I hadn’t intended this piece to be so steamy, however a corrupt mind is the devils workshop I suppose. 😉
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Now that is funny, creative mind may be but hardly the devils workshop. Have a great weekend Daniel!
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I loved this Daniel, one of the best yet in the Whitby Lady series! ❤
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Thank you Lace, I am happy you like the series. Especially happy you liked this post as I actually had doubts about it before publishing it.
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Is this based on the Oscar Wilde addition Daniel? It seems to fit. 😉 I loved the setting and your words as always set the best visuals. 😉
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Hi Summer, yes it actually is based on the Wilde play of Salome, which was the more wicked one of course, but since the Whitby’s for the most part are based in the 1890’s I had to base the play more off of the French “Hérodiade” which was more time appropriate. Thank you for your comment.
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I adore Oscar Wilde’s work. Many of your writings remind me of his work. You stretch the boundaries. 😉
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Daniel I have been collecting the Whitby Lady stories I hope you don’t mind, I imagine they will someday be in print and I want to say I knew them when. 😉 Herodiade is a wonderful edition, with a very imaginative bend to it. I enjoyed reading it very much.
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Hi Lynette, you collect all you would like no problem. I am honored you like my work. Thank you as always for your kind words.
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Your welcome Daniel, and thank you for all the wonderful stories in my collection. 🙂
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I can’t say enough about the ladies and the good work they did here Daniel. 😉 Very well written and I loved the spice!
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Thank you sir Hockey, the ladies of course appreciate your attention. They do a good work to keep us all on our toes. 😉 I think spice is always good don’t you?
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Daniel, sir, spice is life, and I agree it is good to have the ladies keep us all on our best behavior. 😉
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Wow, this was hot and steamy, ❤ it!!!
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Thank you Daria, happy you liked this, and happy the hot and steamy did not offend. 😉
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🙂
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Daniel, I have always been convinced that Salome got a bad rap out of the NT story, and I am pleased to see that you have released her, and she is in good form (ahem). 😉 Very entertaining with your own unique twist and flavor. Hope you’re doing well brother. Shalom, Den
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Hi Dennis, I could not agree more. I too always thought Salome got a raw deal. I suppose great minds and all of that, 😉 Wishing you a great Shabbat my friend. Shalom, Daniel
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My brother I was amused by your great minds remark but truth is truth I suppose. 😉 Shabbat shalom to you and your family.
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Loved the latest addition to the Whitby series, great descriptions, that put me front and center at the playhouse in Leeds. I had a great seat! 😉 ❤
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Thank you Raquel for a wonderful comment and a great compliment. I wanted you in the front row at Leeds, and having you confirm your attendance makes my day. 😉
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It was a thrill Daniel to be on the front row. Thank you for the ticket. ❤ 😉
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My young friend, you gave my heart a start this morning with your post, blood flowing, and a little prickly feeling at the base of my spine. I am never sure what the content will be on your post, but I am always sure I will like it and be entertained. Well done Daniel. Bill
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Thank you Bill. I appreciate your comment. I am thinking your words are quite the compliment, and I am happy I was able to be a part of your morning ritual. Take care my friend, you are worthy to sit with the Whitby’s. 🙂
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I appreciate that you feel this way Daniel. I would be more than happy to be at the Whitby table on any given day. 😉
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I enjoyed this very much Daniel, but I have to say the quote at the top, I assume one of yours is masterfully written and chilling! 🙂
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Thank you Stafford, the quote is mine from an old manuscript (not published) I am happy you liked this piece. Thank you for your comment.
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Great writing Daniel, had my attention from the beginning abstract and brilliant quote, to the very end. You are a great story teller in rhyme.
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Hi Darrin, Thank you for bringing up the abstract. I wasn’t sure if it got noticed that much, but apparently so. I thank you also for your kind compliment, it is very much appreciated.
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I liked the abstract, thought it was a nice touch and for those who are not familiar with the ladies it assist with the story.
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Chilling and at the same time a really fun read. Thank you Daniel enjoyed your post very much. ❤
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Thank you Dani, I am happy you liked this piece, and I love that you found it a fun read. that is what I had intended. I think fun and chilling go together very well. 😉
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Well written Daniel, I have been to the Grand Playhouse in Leeds before, and no doubt will attend again. The next time I shall have a different perspective on it’s stature and history. 😉
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Hi Steve, How exciting that you have actually been onsite at the setting for this post. I appreciate you sharing that with me. I might have some questions for you, just in case I ever expand on the story and make it a story. 😉 Thank you for your comment.
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I will be happy to share any information you need about any location here in the UK. Anything to further the cause and support of the “Whitby Ladies”.
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this was delicious fare, and of course being a Whitby fan, I found each word memorable. Hoping for more individual lady involvement in the upcoming series. I have my favorites. 😉 ❤
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Thank you Destiny for your wonderful comment. Be assured there is more individual Whitby action around the corner. 😉 and hopefully she will be your favorite.
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“She burns her soul on the wood filled stage.” you had me there also with the addition of “Wovenhand”. Great writing.
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Thank you J zee, I appreciate your comment. Wovenhand I just discovered and love there music. Happy you liked this post.
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I love the way you laid the abstract out Daniel, and the quote left me chilled. The poem itself was sexy and at the end it displayed a bit of wit. 🙂
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Thank you Gigi for your wonderful comment. I am happy that you liked this piece. I was hoping that the wit would come through, and I appreciate you validating that it did. Have a great rest of the week. 🙂
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Your welcome! 🙂
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I like the word delicious that one of my predecessors used to describe this wonderful Gothic piece. 😉
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Delicious is one of those words that reminds me of the most wicked kind of pleasures, so it’s a compliment isn’t it? 😉 Thank you Q for your reading and comment.
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I have always loved the word delicious. It reminds me of Snow White and the wicked step mum in Cinderella, a pattern of the wicked and beautiful. 😉
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There is such wickedness and sly humor in this Whitby Lady story. Especially the finale, the poor unsuspecting but deserving Vicar. I ❤ it! 🙂
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Hi Grace, thank you for reading and your comment. i am so happy that the humor twisted as it might have been came through. The Vicar did deserve it didn’t he? 😉
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He did, he did! 🙂 🙂
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It speaks to truth that no matter how wickedly wonderful the Whitby Ladies are, there is always a truly evil entity in disguise, as a man or woman of religion. Herein this prose, the true evil is exposed.
The Ladies of Whitby do not pretend, but in a tempest bend with the wind.
This tale is a great addition to Whitby, Daniel.
So, I’m over at Art Gowns loading up some early insert shots. The new gown will be done shortly, and I should be taking full shots next week.
My next creation will be for a Lady of Whitby.
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Thank you Resa, as a Whitby Lady your comment always is of a value that is beyond compare. You are so right, the universe uses the most unusual things sometimes beings to balance itself, to make what is wrong right. That is the way I see the Whitby Ladies a lot of fun but they can bring judgment if they are called upon to do so. 😉 I am so excited about the gown. I am on my way to Art Gowns now. 🙂
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Fabulous writing, dreamlike!
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Thank you, I appreciate your compliment very much.
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