“We are old flames”, she laughs, her green eyes shining, sending signals to a part of me that has thoughts for later. “You mean like old lover’s I say”, knowing somehow, she is headed in a different direction, but not certain where. “No”, she smiles, and suddenly looks thoughtful, “we were much more”, “probably glowing darkness”, she continues, “intertwined, cobalt blue, flames falling from the heavens, aliens to this earth, we are the seraphim”!
What thought is this that touches breathe, from sub realm worlds our net is cast, to bring us warmth before this day, to bind our hearts to what G_D would say. We walk as one, we fight as two, and we make our bonds, of rougher hew. To know our hearts of what should be, but Lord Let us not strip our identity. For years go by, grant this we pray, when we are hard, our souls so gray, bring us to dreams, and let us be free, and bring us to make our myth reality.
When we were young, much younger still, we lived so hard, with tragic skill. We sought to make what we could not build, and so we stopped while time stood still. From eye to eye, our rage contained, we entered a cave of pain, but still something that was a dream, helped us go on. With love achieved a root deep song. What thought is this, we gave to love; we christened babes with skies above. Gave we them spells upon their lives, said we your blessed, by stars above. For beauty came into their own hearts, my wife my love, how did we start. To know ourselves through what life brought, the lines of time have been our sparks.
What old ways come, to bruise us through, what future kingdom, do we hew, upon our love nobility, rest spirit of our fallibility. For on and on we strike the stone until, the house rest, solid home. To rest in arms not built just flesh, but ideas of G_D built on happiness. The angel turns she is in you, the seraphim mystery, flames of flesh, the girl grown strong, by challenge till death. I parse my thoughts, and I turn too, I bring my seraphim in line with you. For we our strong, much stronger two, unto this day we cast our view, and single out where we go now, all time is ours to say just how.
What thought is this that touches flame, from sub realm worlds our net is cast to bring us warmth before this day, to bind our hearts to what G_D would say. This shore, this shore is our land too, this mountain that would block we cut in two, for unto us is joined a charm, built long ago by G_D’s own arm. Beyond, beyond an octave blue, we shimmer, move in angel blue, at twenty-five and one more too, my heart, my love, I still ask for you.
Twenty-five years ago, this day I married a Seraphim! – – 03.06.2018 – דָּנִיאֵל
Happy anniversary! This is beautifully written!
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Thank you very much Vickie, long time no see, wishing all is well in your world. 🙂
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Dear Daniel, this is beautiful and full of love, tears reality. Blessings this day for both Susan and you, and the road you travel. ❤ Ruby
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Hi Ruby, Thank you, it is a wonderful road we are on, I feel very blessed. Thank you for a wonderful comment.
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Your welcome Daniel, I hope Susan and yourself had the most wonderful day! ❤ Ruby
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It was grand! 😁
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Happy Anniversary Daniel, well done as always!
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Thank you very much Brian, I appreciate it. 🙂
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Beautifully written Daniel, happy anniversary. ❤
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Hi Kristina, thank you for your kind words and wishes.
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Outstanding, your words are filled with timeless love. Happy anniversary. ❤ ❤ ❤
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Thank you Anlosa, I really appreciate you reading and commenting.
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Happy Birthday to your marriage.
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Thank you John, I can’t tell you enough how chuffed I am that you read my writing and follow my blog, I am a long time fan.
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Happy Anniversary Daniel, this is beautiful, the music from Lennon fitting!
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Hi Toni, I have loved #9 Dream ever since John Lennon released it, and vowed I would put it in a writing someday. Thank you for your comment.
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Classic Daniel verbiage, filled with the you that meets the spirit of God. Wonderful! 🙂 Happy Anniversary!
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Hi Danika, thank you, I hope my words are worthy of your wonderful compliment. Have a wonderful evening.
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This was lovely, happy anniversary!
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Thank you Jamie, for your kind comment and best wishes.
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Beautiful,beautiful prose Daniel. Happy Anniversary to you and your wonderful wife! ❤
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Hi Raquel, Thank you once again for reading my stuff, and your wonderful wish.
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Way to go Daniel, twenty-five years is nothing to take lightly in this day and time. Great writing my friend, a blessed anniversary to you and your wife.
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Thank you Alex, I agree the value of love and commitment for the long haul in relationships seems sadly missing. Thank you for reading and your comment.
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Love the writing and the song, very romantic in a mystical way. Happy anniversary.
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Hi Dani, thank you, I am a great fan of the song as well, wishing you a great evening.
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Happy Anniversary Daniel, this was good stuff!!! 🙂
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Thank you very much Carmel, I appreciate your comment very much.
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Love this Daniel, happy anniversary!
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Thank you Caroline, and thanks for your kind anniversary wishes.
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Happy Anniversary to you and your wife, Daniel I enjoyed this piece immensely. Much wisdom in few words.
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Hi Stafford, thank you very much for your comment as well as your kind wishes. 🙂
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Fantastic writing, love the metaphors! 🙂
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Thank you Lynette, love metaphors myself. 😉
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I love the way you start this one off, and the music video fits so well. Happy anniversary you love birds. ❤
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Thank you Elizabeth for your kind comment and wishes. Love birds we shall continue on for another twenty-five years to be. 😉
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Congratulations, 25 years is credible, most people don’t make it over 5. Wonderful writing.
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Thank you for reading and commenting on my work. I agree there is a serious lack of long term marriages in our culture.
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YW! 🙂 ❤
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“What thought is this that touches flame, from sub realm worlds our net is cast to bring us warmth before this day, to bind our hearts to what G_D would say. This shore, this shore is our land too, this mountain that would block we cut in two, for unto us is joined a charm, built long ago by G_D’s own arm. Beyond, beyond an octave blue, we shimmer, move in angel blue, at twenty-five and one more too, my heart, my love, I still ask for you.” magical prose my friend!
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Thank you so much Jerri, I am thrilled you enjoyed this piece. I appreciate your comment.
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Beautiful and magical Daniel, best wishes fo another twenty-five years and on-wards to you and your lovely wife.
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Thank you so much Ginger for your kind wishes. I do appreciate it. Wishing you a wonderful evening ahead.
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My friend this is just wonderful, each word to me is a compliment to your marriage and the twenty-five years of nuptial bliss and trials you and your lovely wife have traveled. Great blessings to you this day. Bill
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Hi Bill, I always enjoy your remarks, and as always am humbled and feel a great sense of appreciation. I do especially appreciate your blessing.
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Your welcome Daniel, small offering on my part as compared to the blessings I have received from reading your writing.
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Happy Anniversary Daniel, twenty-five years is a great milestone to achieve. I found your piece to be very appropriate, the music went well with it.
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Thank you Darrin, I very much appreciate your comment and best wishes. I have heard more about this song then perhaps any other I ever used to go with a piece. I might have to do more Lennon in the future. 😉
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I am a fan myself!
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My dear brother, sending all the best wishes to Susan and you upon this day, how wonderful that your lights shine these 25 years, and I pray they continue for an eternity. Your writing as always gripped me and held me within the arms of its intensity. May Hashem bless you and your loved ones this wonderful day! Den
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My dear brother, thank you as always for reading and commenting. Your blessings and prayers through the lat year have sustained me many times. I do appreciate this virtual relationship. Wishing you a great rest of the week and if I don’t talk to you before Shabbos, Shabbat Shalom, Daniel
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Shabbat Shalom brother, thank you for your comment, I too appreciate our friendship in this forum. Wishing Susan and yourself long life and blessed happiness. Shalom, Den
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Outstandingly beautiful writing Daniel, happy, happy anniversary. ❤
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Hi Dawn, Thank you so much for your kind compliment and best wishes. Have a great evening. 🙂
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Happy Anniversary, absolutely loved this!
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Hi Karen, Thank you so much for reading and your kind comment. So happy you loved this piece.
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My favorite line, “We walk as one, we fight as two, and we make our bonds, of rougher hew. To know our hearts of what should be, but Lord Let us not strip our identity.” ❤
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Thank you Chelsie, as always I am thankful for your reading and comments.
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Pleasure always is mine. 😉
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Congratulations to you and the Missus Daniel, it takes everything you mentioned in your great prose above to accomplish time. well done..
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Hi Ryan, well I am honored as always by what you have to say. 😉 Thank you my friend. 🙂
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You have a long list of well wishers here Daniel, and i want to add my name to this list. I am always amazed at the depth that is in the words you write and this was no exception. It was wonderful. Happy Anniversary to Susan and yourself, and may you go forward into eternity, Seraphim as which you came. ❤ ❤ ❤
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Hi Heather, Thank you for your wonderful comment and best wishes on our anniversary. I don’t care where you are on the list, your words are always valuable. 😉
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Daniel it is I who appreciate your words, and I thank you very much for them. I hope your anniversary was the most memorable one! ❤
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Stunning, and well written, my best to you and your wife on this momentous occasion. ❤
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Hi Abigail, as always I thank you for your reading and commenting on my work. I appreciate your best wishes on our anniversary as well.
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Happy Anniversary to Daniel and Susan!
Each of you is the reason.
There’s no other logic,
No written poem to
Attest to your continued
Loving
Home.
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Thank you Resa, so happy to know you in this forum, you are the real deal my friend! 😉 So the next one I’m putting up is a real story, most of what I put up is kind of true, in a sort of kind of way but roadside souls is real! 😉
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Daniel — I’m sorry I missed this post back in March. It is a beautiful tribute to your wife and the love you share. It fills me with happiness to know, my brother, that you Journey in the presence of a love like this! All the best to you and Susan… may you and your angel have many, many more years!! jen
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This is sweet of you Jen. So thankful to have you as a friend. Shalom, Daniel
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