“I know a bank whereon the wild thyme blows. Where oxlips and the nodding violet grows. Quite canopied over with luscious woodbine. With sweet muskroses and with eglantine. There sleeps Titania sometime of the night. Lulled in these flowers with dances and delights.” – Shakespeare
“But I know a place where we can go and wash away these sins.”- Henley & Hornsby
Titania watches him with interest before the dawn breaks, a round of leaves within her mussed hair. She thinks to let him go might be a good thing, but she cannot. He has come to her on a mid-summers night, at the end of his innocence and he is alone.
Oh his childhood, cries his childhood, stolen by the name of ruin. Hips withdrawing, pants still falling, injustice by these fates not bloomed. Oh his childhood, cries his childhood, finite too soon. Find the hedges for your hiding for the nighttime is coming soon.
He hid among the hedges, in a tunnel of which rabbits made, a long leaf filled burrow between the house and the gravel roadway. In his mind, he pictured safety, a sanctuary of play, and though he hid his body, his soul was on display. The world of summer was risen, with the night falling in, and somewhere there were angels. Watching in interest over his boyhood den. He looked through tiny windows at the darkness. A world so warm in gloom. He interlaced his fingers, and felt himself traveling further outside his self-induced cocoon. So, it was there in the twilight, far from his desert moon. He thought of all that had happened, an indiscretion born so soon.
For he hid among the hedges, in a tunnel made of thought, watching fireflies dance outside, for in truth they are more than spark. Near the point of total nighttime, when monsters bare their teeth. Silent shadows, silent wisdom, all is hidden beyond display. Not a sound in all creation, like the very first day. He lays himself still burdened lost in thoughts of the afternoon. Oh his childhood, cries his childhood, stolen by the name of ruin. Hips withdrawing, pants still falling, injustice by these fates not bloomed. Oh his childhood, cries his childhood, finite too soon. Find the hedges for your hiding for the nighttime is coming soon.
He hid among the hedges in a place of hideaway, watching fireflies go to heaven for a purpose in which they stayed. In the glooming, in the hedges, came the silence of the break. Just a moment there is reason, nothing happens by fair mistake. He wraps his arms in loneliness and watches his soul begin to fade. For the want of its own amusement, it hides away. Softly crying to the nighttime such a movement of a score. Led by mercy, thoughts emotions and the life we are purposed for. In the hedges, in the hedges, a place of no mistakes. In the hedges under fireflies, asleep as the dawn breaks. – 08.01.2019 – דָנִיֵּאל
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So, the Queen of the Fairies has driven him to the hedges.
I’m sure in nighttime he will emerge from the hedges, looking for Titania all the same.
Innocence being over is finite.
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Hi Resa, I agree finite such a lengthy word for being only two syllables. 😉
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Great piece Daniel, as always you amaze.
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Thank you Scott. I am always grateful for your kind comments. Have a great weekend.
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You as well Daniel.
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Well written, with layers of possibly dark theme.
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Thank you Ellen. I appreciate your kind words. Hopefully not too dark is the theme.
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Not to dark at all, just the right of mystery involved however. 😉
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I found myself with tears in my eyes while reading your post. A sadness there, a loneliness and then a comfort from the unknown. This was beautiful.
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Thank you Tella, I am happy this piece touched you so. I do appreciate your kind compliment.
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YW your gift at writing is always a blessing to read.
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Daniel this is one of your writings that for me is so personal, it is difficult to just leave a compliment as to it’s wonderful style. The words have a special life of their own, that describe feelings that invoke both discomfort and comfort to me. I will be thinking about it throughout the day, and might comment again later.
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Thank you Lauren, really happy you liked this, and always happy to hear from you. 🙂
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Your very welcome Daniel.
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Dear Daniel,
Once again, you have stirred up many emotions for me with your wonderful ability to use words. This was amazing poetry.
❤
Ruby
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Hi Ruby, Thank you again for being so kind as to comment on my work. I am always grateful for your words of support. 🙂
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Always happy to comment on your work Daniel. It is marvelous. 🙂
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You have a gift, and you use it well. 🙂
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Thank you very much you are very kind.
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🙂 Welcome 🙂
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Amazing personal thoughts written in rhyme.
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Thank you, I am honored by your compliment.
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❤ ❤ ❤
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Thank you Heather, I am continually grateful that you read and compliment my work. Shavua tov.
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Shavua tov Daniel. ❤
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Thank you very much.
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This was quite a pleasure to read.
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Thank you Patty.
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This was a thinking piece Daniel that had some ominous undertone to it, or at least I took it that way. Well written as all your work is. Am I correct on the ominous part?
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Hi Wang, Interesting that you brought up the ominous flavor, I didn’t mean for it to head that way, but I too thought it had that flavor. I often think you and I travel much the same road in thought. 😉 Thank you for your insight my friend.
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We do travel that same road Daniel. Ominous perhaps is not that bad, mysterious I like much better. 😉
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Your ability to describe visually is amazing. Fascinating post.
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Thank you very much Mimi, I appreciate your kind compliment.
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Daniel your words I am still processing just as the child within the hedge was processing. Perhaps the answer at the end of the process is peace, I hope so, perhaps it is resolve, I hope so. Perhaps it is grief, I hope not. Amazing prose.
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Hi Lynette, Thank you for your kind words. I think you are correct, the end of the process is peace. 🙂
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Your welcome Daniel and correct. The end process sought is always peace. Thank you for your part in leading many of us there.
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My young friend, perhaps one of your finest pieces, and for the time being will be one of the most memorable ones for this old man. Bill
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No old men in hedges and fireflies Bill, just dreamy eyed boys. 😉 Thank you my friend for your comment.
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Thank you my young friend, dreamy eyed boy has a better sound to it. 😉 Bill
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❤ this Daniel!
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Thank you Raquel, very happy you liked it.
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I always do and your welcome. 🙂
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Again Daniel, a thoughtful sonnet with fitting quotes and music. Keep them coming my friend. 😉
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Hi Ryan, thank you for your kind words. Always happy to hear from you and especially when you like something. 🙂
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That would every post would it not my friend. 😉
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Some great lines in the hedges. 😉 Great read for summertime.
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Thank you Darrin, very happy you liked this. I thought summer time needed a mid summer piece. 😉
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It belongs in summer as a great memory. I liked this one. Thank you.
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Enjoyed this rhyme Daniel, you never fail to entertain with your talent.
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Thank you very much Carmel, I appreciate your kind words.
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Always fun to comment on your interesting verbiage Daniel. 🙂
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This was delightful. You can never go wrong with hedges and fireflies and love filled summer nights. 🙂
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Very true Itsa, thank you for your kind words. So happy you liked this.
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🙂 That I did. and your welcome.
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Daniel great visuals in this piece, I enjoyed it very much. Thank you and have a great weekend.
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Wishing you a great weekend as well Steve. Thank you for your kind compliment. Happy you liked this piece.
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I meant to tell you I saw my first firefly on a visit to the southern part of your country last summer. It was the most interesting thing. 😉
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❤ this. Shabbat shalom. 🙂
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Thank you Lisa. Shavua tov. 🙂
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Shavua tov…:) ❤
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Interesting piece, loved the quotes you used.
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Thank you, I am happy you enjoyed the post.
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Very much so.
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Good stuff mate, I wished for a hedge of my own after reading it. 😉
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Thank you Shaun. I hope you find that hedge. 😉
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Hopefully no briers mate. 😉
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There is a melancholy sweetness to this piece that is adorable. Keep writing Daniel. 🙂
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Hi Abigail, Thank you for reading and your wonderful comment. I appreciate your continued support of my writing. 🙂
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Your welcome, I often think you write the best journal, with words I wish I had and thoughts I wish I could produce. 🙂
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There has been a temptation to regret unintentionally misleading words (gone now not because of this), but then again, how else would you tap unfathomable depths of karmic cleansing and fulfill such a divine mission…
From the metaphorical to the literal and back again, into the uncontainable compassion that your beloved soul shares with us.
Thank you Daniel. Your nourishing ones keep working with Titania’s. God bless you and yours always my brother. More through my heart this coming Saturday, on forty-ninth for this temple, and two days later for twenty-fifth there; gentle strength to her and deep harmony between you always. And amongst us all. 🌞🙏
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Thank you Leon. I wish more than a mid summer’s night dream for you brother. I wish life with all its blessings. May your 49th be stellar. It falls on Shabbos how could it not be. 😃 Shalom, Daniel
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I cherished this, you are a marvelous writer. So happy I ran across your blog.
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Thank you very much Rhoda and welcome to my blog. Happy to have you here.
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Such lyrical words. You have a mysterious way of writing, very appealing to the subconscious.
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Thank you Nicole, very grateful for your kind words. Welcome to my blog.
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Very refreshing and thoughtful post. Looking forward to read more from you.
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Thank you very much.
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