“It’s like driving a car at night: you never see further than your headlights, but you can make the whole trip that way.” – E.L. Doctorow
“Beautiful calm driving, deep-sea pearl diving”. – Sia
I suppose these are the questions and the gifts of what was youth. Bear with me a little longer, while I drive on toward the truth.
I drive around a hillside that I drove so long ago, looking to the starboard future to the left of stardust glow. It seemed just for a second I was born upon a bed, a mortal existential of what some G_D had said. In the twinkling of a lifetime, I was old and old again. It is time to drive myself homeward once again. I suppose I should speak silently, just a nod or two in sleep, or continue to just sit here on this hill, that is not so steep. Still, may I ask a question or a second if I could? For I do not wish to go on driving misunderstood.
Was it I that floated past you in the summer time, with the moon smiling wickedly at a three percent of shine? Did I seduce you, did I know you, and was I a little boy at all? Would you answer softly speaking while I drive on through to fall?
Did I not sit upon a hill of stars, falling from the spirit-filled sky, and did I not kiss them each one silently, like the apple of my eyes? And did I not change from one heart to another, of that from clay to air, and under your simple direction did I not become a man in that same air?
Did you not transmit breathe to me while you held the planets in your hand? The sound of moonlight falling over a mighty world of sand. And forever did you not caution me, without provocation to stand, boy you had better drive so carefully, so carefully when you can?
I drive around a hillside that I drove so long ago, maybe it is in the Ozarks or the desert of New Mexico, or maybe that same hillside has grown a length or two. Maybe it is now in Colorado where the mountains give a further view. For it is in the sum of all my questions, and the space I place them on, I begin to wonder oh moon of sliver lighting if you are the origin or the sum? I suppose these are the questions and the gifts of what was youth. Bear with me a little longer, while I drive on toward the truth. – 07.02.19 – דָנִיֵּאל
The truth is… that hillside is your youth. Mine too.
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And so it is my friend, and drive on to a higher hillside we shall. 😁
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…. and we probably won’t need a car. Who knows what vehicle?
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Hover bikes! 😉
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Ahhh… possibly! Wings? I’d like that! 🧚♀️
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This poem really speaks to me, Daniel. I feel I’ve journeyed so long, but I’ve seen so little, and I’ve no clue if I’m getting any closer to truth. So many questions, but even without answers, the drive continues…
All the best to you and yours, jen
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Happy 4th My friend. I really appreciated your comment. All drives have an end and I suspect our truths are reserved there. My best to you and yours.
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Dear Daniel,
This is airy, calming and reads from your past to your future, as it does mine. Thank you.
❤
Ruby
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Happy you liked it Ruby, sorry for the wait of my response.
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No problem on the wait and you are very welcome. 🙂
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Beautiful inward perspective, facing out. 🙂
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Thank you Cheri, happy you liked it.
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🙂
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Daniel this reads like a dream of life, I loved it. The Sia song is incredible. I had not heard it before.
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Thank you Itsa, I also loved the Sia song.
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YW! 🙂
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Daniel I love the way this poem flows, each line memorable and full of meaning. a personal favorite for me is: “Did I not sit upon a hill of stars, falling from the spirit-filled sky, and did I not kiss them each one silently, like the apple of my eyes?”
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Thank you so much Jane. My apologies for the late reply.
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Late replies are always better than no replies, and you are very welcome. 🙂
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Well written Daniel, your look at life is one that I share, from beginning on to the truth at the end. 😉 Thank you.
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Thank you Steve for your wonderful comment. My apologies for such a tardy reply.
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Not a problem my friend. You are very welcome. Looking forward to your next write. 🙂
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Personally I have never thought of age as the valley of life, rather as you do I see it sitting very well on a mountain gazing for its next horizon.
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Indeed Carmel I would strongly agree with your comment. Thank you, and my apology for such a late reply.
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Great post, I enjoy your writing very much. With this you gave me much to chew on. 😉
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Thank you for your wonderful comment. My apologies for such a late reply.
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❤ 🙂
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😁 thank you Lisa. My apologies for the late reply.
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Daniel, “Drive” is a wonderful addition to your journey. The words speak to a constant search. I am wondering if that search takes us even on into the next life. Shalom, Heather ❤ ❤ ❤
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I thank you my friend for your wonderful comment. I think you are correct the next life waits for us to drive on. 😉. My apologies for such a tardy reply.
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It is an exciting thought to think about the future. So much better than always looking behind ones self. 😉
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Several lines in this poem that got to me. Your drive is much better than a walk, and I am happy to be a passenger if there is room. 🙂
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Thank you for taking the time to comment. You are more than welcome on this drive. Plenty of room.
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Daniel this is a wonderful poem full of meaningful verse. I received so much from it and thought the line on reincarnation was genius, perhaps my favorite. “It seemed just for a second I was born upon a bed, a mortal existential of what some G_D had said. In the twinkling of a lifetime, I was old and old again. It is time to drive myself homeward once again.” I will probably be repeating it to myself throughout this day as I grow “older and older again.” 😉
Wang
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Thank you Wang for your comment. I think you nai6it. I really hadn’t thought of that phrase from a reincarnation point of view. My apologies for such a late reply my friend.
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Your welcome Daniel, the reincarnation point of view was the first thought that hit me. As to the late reply think of it no more. We all have other lives. 😉
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“Drive” was great writing Daniel. It flowed like a nice calm drive at night, above the valley. A great life!
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Thank you my friend, driving at night is cool.
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Not much I can add to what Darrin just said, the reflective part of this post was gentle yet questioning as all reflections should be. The future was still the journey with the insatiable search for the truth always before you. It was everything I can identify with. Thank you.
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Thank you Scott I am happy identified with this piece. I apologize for the late reply.
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Not a problem on the late reply Daniel. WP should always be secondary to life. 😉
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Once again well done Daniel. The drive through life is always full of questions but in the end, we drive on, looking for what is within our headlamps.
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Within our headlamps, I too thought it a great quote. Thank you Dallas for your wonderful comment. My apologies for such a tardy reply.
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❤
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Thank you Petra. So happy you liked this.
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This post is the reason I am a fan mate. It is truthful, speaks your heart and many others including my own.
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Thank you Shaun. I am really humbled by your comment. My apologies for my late reply.
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NP, and no need to be humble when it is a gift. 😉
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Great piece my friend. You hammered the nail right where it needed to be hammered for me once again and I thank you. 😉
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Hi Ryan, thank you for your wonderful comment my friend. I am not that great with a hammer so there is that. Regardless I appreciate the compliment. 😉
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Wonderful!!!
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Thank you Abigail. So happy you liked this.
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Very welcome Daniel. 🙂
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Daniel your post is fantastic. I love the gentleness of the rhythm. The words are hypnotic and the song adds even more. I listened to it several times as I read and reread your words. Thank you.
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Thank you zgigi for your kind words. I am happy you liked this piece. I appreciate you taking the time to read and leave your thoughts.
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Always a pleasure Daniel, wishing you a great day. 🙂
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Very soothing Daniel. Made me want to go for a drive. 😉
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Lol, I like that Brian. Thank you.
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Ah, the magic of life’s drive, you have captured it very well Daniel. The questions of youth, some answered in the drive itself, some never answered until the truth in the end. This was amazing.
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Thank you so much Lynette. I appreciate your comment. I agree some questions get answered along the way some in the end.
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You are welcome. I find in my life it is hard to be patient and wait for some answers. Something I work on daily. 😉
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Loved this and like many others found myself in it. Have a wonderful holiday.
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Thank you Amy, I appreciate your comment. My apologies for such a late reply.
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Spirit filled words my brother. The constant search for truth which I can identify with. We drive together you and I. This is a good drive to have company on. 😉 Shalom, Den
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Hi Dennis. Thank you for your wonderful comment. I would appreciate having you upon this drive my brother. Shalom, Daniel
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My brother I am already there! 😉 🙂
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❤ this Daniel!
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Thank you Raquel. So happy you liked it.
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Very very welcome Daniel. 🙂
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Amazing writing Daniel. Your gift truly keeps giving to us your readers. I enjoyed and identified with this post very much. Thank you. 🙂
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Dear Daniel,
There is such an amazing release in this piece. Your word give in to the search the drive, as the song says the calm. Thank you for this gift on this day.
Shalom,
Erin
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Nice blog
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Thank you Saania. 🙂
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My pleasure, followed you!
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Thank you. I will head over your way this weekend when I have a chance and check your blog out.
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Cool!
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