“And I’m just dreaming counting the ways to where you are” – Vladimir John Ondrasik III
“Oh Wow, Oh Wow, Oh Wow”! – Steve Jobs, October 5, 2011
“The Moment”
Such quietness now, where there was none, machines of the living as they stop undone. The lights above turn to darkened grey, and four wheels they slow, as the final gasp fades away. A disconnect from cold steel poles, and a light so bright is turned down low, an urgent whisper from an EMT goes out through a mic and cannot be retrieved. Life oh life from a second to none, an eternity of thought before the final moment comes. An interest of mine, from the outside looking in, is not the eternal here after, but that space before the end.
“The Moment”
Were there sudden questions asked, about the weight of sin, delicate weights moved from the life that was when. Oh forgiveness did you come on down, in a space or a flash, was it like here on earth not permanent or fully grasped. Was there Eastern peace held still within, the lucky of this planet not taught the guilt by chagrin. Did the wind that moved right by, cause your mortality to wake or was that just a steel tipped angel reminding you it is there to take. Take you to the land of Holy Moses may be to move around, to become inwardly recycled, once a lost but now a found. In that micro second brimming in the crack that is a door, was there choice that was your willing to move to nothing, or something toward. Were there a million familiar faces, named all legion everyone, or a light in the eyes of a small child with a hand that said come here.
The Moment”
Each time a crossing is affected by the ending of a beat, and the numbers that were counting come to zero that repeats. I would study that small interval, and stand in that breech. Hold my breath as if it mattered; ask my voice to not compete. For the tearing of the curtain from the window of the eye, happens truly in the zenith between the last breath and open sky. Between the last breath and open sky. One more time, between the last breath and open, open sky!– 05.14.2018 – דָנִיֵּאל
My dear Daniel, the emotion was perhaps too deep, the words too strong, but I cannot stop crying, for something here reminds me of my dear Mother passing, and that moment before, that wonderful moment. This is not bad, this is wonderful. What you write is blessed. Thank you. ❤ Ruby
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Thank you Ruby. I think I hear you saying its okay and the moment is what you hold with you. Maybe someday you will let me know how that is, and what that is. Thank you again for your wonderful comment.
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It is definitely okay dear Daniel. I was truly touched by this post. You have a gift, I have told you that many times before, but it came out ever strongly in your words written here. ❤
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Thank you again Ruby, I do appreciate your kind words, as I always do! 🙂
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As I do yours! xoxo ❤
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Daniel this is astounding writing, anyone who wonders of death should read this!
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I Erin, thank you so much for your wonderful comment. Death I fear the in between I am curious of. 😉
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Your welcome. 🙂 Sometimes I fear it all. 🙂
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This is wonderfully written, layer upon layer of meaning. So much powerful emotive phrases. you have penned a piece that surpasses theology.
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Thank you Olivia. I sometimes think may be we complicate death to much, and like you are hinting at, I believe theology is at the root of the problem.
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I agree, western attitudes toward death amount to a morbid curiosity, not a part of the life process.
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This is fire from your mind and soul my holy brother. Words and questions the angels dare not ponder. Fantastic, I wept as I read it. Shalom, Den
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Hi Den, I like your phrase, “Words and questions the angels dare not ponder.” I might have to borrow it from you someday. 😉 As always thank you brother for your wonderful comment. Shalom, Daniel
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It is yours to have my brother. Even in that moment. 😉
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Than I shall take it. 🙂
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My dear brother it was always yours anyway! 😉
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“For the tearing of the curtain from the window of the eye, happens truly in the zenith between the last breath and open sky.” I love this phrase, how you come to create and write it is a miracle itself. This was beautiful. ❤
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Thank you so much Deb, I really appreciate your kind words. I am not sure about that final moment, but I tried to give it my best shot, and I am thrilled you found it successful. 😉
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Your welcome! 🙂
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Such a unique perspective Daniel, while most wonder about what is next you probe what is in between. Fascinating and genius.
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Hi Chelsie, thank you for your perspective. I guess I really hadn’t thought about it that way even thought that is the point of the whole post. 😉 Wishing you a wonderful evening my friend.
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YW! 🙂
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A rare question, actually a brilliant question Daniel. I thought of my grandparents passing when I read this. They died three weeks apart in 2011, bother with a memorable death. I was there, and there was that moment. Thank you for this. ❤
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Thank you Raquel for sharing your experience with your grandparents death with me. What a wonderful opportunity and blessing you had to be with them. That moment is indeed special. I shared it when my father passed away. Thank you as always for your wonderful comments.
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Daniel it was a blessing, and as you know from your own experience with your father, there are no words that describe it, although you have come close here to the impossible. 😉
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A heck of a post Daniel, one of your best yet and there have been many. The words I identify with the most. “Were there sudden questions asked, about the weight of sin, delicate weights moved from the life that was when.” 😉
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Thank you King, it is probably the phase that I also identify the most with, not having the benefit of the precepts of the East. 😉
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We will have our guilt together than Daniel, perhaps form a club! 😉
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An amazing piece Daniel, that I admit brought tears to my eyes when I played the FFF piece and read it through again. What a wonderful question to be answered for so many of us. This as so many of your pieces was masterful, and inspired.
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Hi Wang, thank you for your wonderful comment. It is a wonderful tune by FFF, I have always liked it and wanted to write something around it, and this presented itself. I would agree the question is wonderful and the answer which is provided by my association with wonderful folks like yourself is delectable. 😉
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I was trying to find out what FFF was up to, and he apparently is semi-retired. Shame really, very talented. You are welcome my friend, your words never cease to amaze and lift me up. Wang
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I do not know why this touched me so, it reminded me of the death of my wonderful sister, and the moment before she passed. Thank you for bringing out a sacred memory for me. ❤
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Thank you for sharing that with me Dawn. I am sure that was a sacred memory, how fortunate you were. As I have shared with others I experienced something similar when my father passed away. Have a great evening my friend.
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Your so welcome Daniel, I like the term sacred memory, the occasion was that, and is a moment I will never forget until I have my own moment.
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Daniel, the moment is eternal, and the question asked and answered is of the sort that benefits all of mankind. You have offered a spiritual key in so few words. ❤ D
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Thank you Delilah, I appreciate your kind words. Hopefully I do not lose the key, I have been known to do that. 😉
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Hard to match what has already been said in praise for this piece my friend. Impossible to match the depth of what you have written. I identify with that moment as all others do who have sat by the bedside of someone going forward.
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Hi Ryan, It is amazing to me the stories that people tell who have been bedside at a death. They are almost always the same. It has to mean something I suppose. Thank you my friend for your comment and your continuous input into my blog. It is appreciated.
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Very welcome Daniel. I agree it becomes hard to sell short the many stories that witness a peaceful death and how similar they are.
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Daniel, for me this is one of the most heart reaching pieces you have ever written. The thought, the moment that space between life and death is a question each of us wonders about. You do a wonderful job of providing an answer. Thank you. ❤ Summer
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Hi Summer, Thank you for your kind comment. You are correct, in that I think any searching person in life thinks about that moment, and I believe even though there are guides everywhere that tell us how to prepare. No one knows how. 😉
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Daniel, I gave that some thought. I think it is an individual decision that is based on the individual not up to a guide. What do you think? 😉
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This is inspired writing my young friend, with words of prose that bring tears to me, and I tell you they are tears of comfort. Thank you Daniel!
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Thank you Bill for your comment. As always my friend I am humbled by your replies to what I have written, and to hear that you have tears of comfort makes my day. 🙂
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Your welcome my young friend.
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This is verbiage that sneaks up on you and grabs you and in the end you are left breathless. That point in between life and death, is filed with both it would seem. Your words were starling and comforting Daniel. This was well spun.
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Thank you Dallas. I appreciate your complimentary words. The comfort part is what I had hoped for, and so I appreciate you adding that adjective in. 😉 Wishing you a great rest of the week my friend.
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Being in peace going forward is worth it’s weight in time spent looking for eternal answers. Once again Daniel, this post was a gem!
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“The Moment” is outstanding work Daniel. It has something to the ending that sends the reader forward to that moment with anticipation, perhaps takes the fear away. Well done.
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Thank you Darrin, I love your comment and am very appreciative of the way you saw the ending to the piece. I suppose I could not have ever wished for better.
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Nor I Daniel, I suppose I will find out going forward. 😉
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My favorite words and there were many came from the following, “Was there Eastern peace held still within, the lucky of this planet not taught the guilt by chagrin.” This is so true! Fantastic prose Daniel. ❤
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Hi Lauren, I read somewhere a while back that when missionary’s came to Japan they soon became discouraged in there work because there was no word in the Japanese language that they could use to teach the natives guilt. I have never forgotten that. Thank you for a great comment. 😉
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The Japanese people are incredible! 🙂 Thank you for that tid bit of religious trivia, I plan on using it in the future. 🙂
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This was fantastic Daniel, an emotional piece without the drama. I kept thinking of a quote from Cicero, “The life of the dead is placed in the memory of the living.” Shalom, Heather ❤ ❤ ❤
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Thank you Heather for your wonderful comment. I love the Cicero quote. How did you know it is a favorite of mine. 😉 Shalom, Daniel
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🙂 I really didn’t know that, but I am not surprised. Anyone that writes like you has to think like Cicero. ❤
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The rapper or Roman politician. 😉
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I think the names are spelled different Daniel, but nice try! 😉
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The Moment is the only moment after birth that counts I think. This was a masterpiece and displays your skills to go from Gothic suspense to spiritual peace.
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Hi Lynette, Thank you for a wonderful comment. I believe you are correct, what two moments would be more important than birth and death. Well put my friend.
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Amazing words Daniel, as with so many others of your readers, I was teary eyed upon the finish. ❤ 🙂
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Thank you Ginger for reading and your kind comment. I am happy you found this post endearing.
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Daniel, Your description of the moment in the first paragraph left me breathless, from there on I felt as if I was a bystander watching a holy process take place. This was a beautiful piece. ❤
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Thank you Erin for your wonderful comment. You actually gave me one of the best compliments. I wanted the reader to be a bystander as I was. Wishing you a great evening my friend.
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Your welcome, reading is one of the few pleasures that I allow myself the role of by stander. Sure there are times that there is a call to action, which I follow, but even that call follows an observation of what I have read. 🙂 ❤
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Great quotes, great writing and great music. You are on a roll Daniel! 😉
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Thank you Steve, I really appreciate your kind words. Wishing you a great evening or night as the case may be on your side of the pond. 😉
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Wonderfully written Daniel. I felt as if I was reading a modern Rumi. Your talent continuously excels and brings richness to all who read your prose. Thank you. ❤
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Thank you Abigail, you humble me with your kind comment. Rumi is a favorite and so I am doubly humbled. 🙂 I am happy you liked this post, as always I appreciate you reading and commenting. 🙂
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“Death has nothing to do with going away.
The sun sets.
The moon sets.
But they are not gone.
~Rumi” ❤
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Thank you Abigail.
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Y are welcome Daniel. ❤
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This was a wonderful post. I enjoy your writing. 🙂
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Hi Bettina, Thank your so much, for your kind words. Welcome to my blog. 🙂
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Thank you for your welcome, I do plan on being back. 😉
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Dear Daniel, “THE MØMENT” is another stunning piece of writing. I’ve read your words several times, there’s much to take in. I like the 3 vignettes of “The Moment”, all profound. I believe time becomes irrelevant in each instance, and that space before the end, is a continuum, here’s the rub, numbers are absolute. (That space is not a sliver, it’s all relative. Some answers are found in the numbers.) Beautiful line, “…truly in the zenith between the last breath and open sky.” Wishing you a good evening, Daniel, and a terrific Wednesday ahead. ~ Mia
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Hi Mia, Thank you for your wonderful comment. I forget about the talent you possess with numbers, and how those numbers relate to that continuum. I hope you will share that knowledge with me binary I know, however I think your telling me there is something beyond the 0 0 1 1 1. We can talk about it off blog. As always wondrful comment.
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Thank you, Daniel, for your kind reply. Don’t you agree there are two sides to every coin, and always more to the story? Wishing you a terrific Thursday! ~ Mia
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Indeed there is my friend, and I am ever ready to know it! 😉 Shabbat shalom Mia. Your friend, Daniel
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Have a great evening my friend. Daniel
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The Twilight Zone?
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Resa that’s funny! Could be why I adore you. 🙂
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