“There is nothing so terrible as activity without insight.” – Johann Wolfgang von Goethe
Wounded woman went to crooked tree, and though its shade fell a little strangely, she said it met her needs. On a hot day in Arizona, wounded woman cried, said this sun is killing me, it must be this stupid tree’s pride. For if, it would just straighten its arm up above, and condition itself to accept my love. It is not as if I am expecting it to come down to me, all I want is a little structural relevancy. Wounded woman tore her blouse and she covered her burns with sand, she said she really did not understand, the crooked tree, and she raised her burning hand. Said she doubted that the crooked tree would ever change. Still she would wait another day. Yes, she would wait another day.
Brother Jensen, preached his sermon to an empty seat, and he thought the words outside would bring a sinner’s defeat. With just the right amount of venom spent the righteous ground to a bitter rent. The reverend could not recall why his church was empty at all. As “Eleanor Rigby” plays nearby, Brother Jensen sinks inside. How can unrepentant man, dig deeper into sin, oh the ocean is so wide? Would the water of truth wash all sins away, were it as a purifying fire, vetted forth in a righteous kind of way? Brother Jensen looks to the mirror, perhaps more practice to bring the sinner to the way. Yes, he should preach another day.
See you government, see you queens, standing over, what they glean. Stand’s the master under blue sky, over the beggar, who do not know why. What is parliament, and the master hand, when the sky is cracked, and still they stand? Do they wonder why toil and fears? Term they weakness of a thousand tears. Still they look on at another day. Yes, they would wait another day. – 03.23.2018 – דָּנִיֵּאל
Wonderful it looks as if I am first to comment on this wonderful piece of mysticism and wisdom. I will simply say you astound me Daniel Swearingen! ❤ Ruby
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Thank you Ruby, always happy to see you at the front of the line and I am grateful. 😁
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The last will be first. 😉
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This is prose that makes one think Daniel. Insight in a spiritual whole person effect I suppose. Well done.
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Thank you Shaun for your comment. I think of insight as a spiritual gift, or talent. 😉
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I concur mate! 😉
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This is outstanding Daniel. Why we do what we do and then wonder why things don’t turn out better. Guilty of that myself I suppose. ❤
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Hi Heather, guilty of that myself many times in life. But then the good thing is you realize it, thus the insight for change. Thank you as always for reading and commenting.
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Hi Daniel I like the way you phrased that. Insight, and going forward with knowledge and light. Shavua Tov! ❤
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Shavua tov Heather!
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Really has to be a new favorite of mine Daniel. Love the Beatles reference in the second stanza.
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Hi Wang, Thank you for commenting. I almost went a different direction with the second paragraph, but I am happy I left it as is. Wishing you a great week ahead my friend.
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That is the interesting thing about writing when we go to replace a paragraph a word or a sentence and we stop. I am glad you did stop. 🙂 Blessings to your family and yourself as well this week Daniel.
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Thank you Wang!
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Absolutely adore this Daniel.
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Thank you Brooke, so happy you liked this. Wishing you a wonderful end to the weekend and week ahead.
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Your welcome Daniel, wishing you very much the same. ❤
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I find this a timely poem.
Although your thoughts may have come from another place, mine come from all the youth I saw today, standing in unity under the crooked tree of government, rejecting it. Daniel, they moved me , greatly. The next generation is about to inherit the earth, and their energy is omnipresent.
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Hi Resa, What a neat experience that must of been for you, thank you for sharing it with me. This may sound a little like I just write and throw stuff against a verbal wall to see what sticks but I never really set out to make a point, something just sticks in my mind and off I go on a rampage at a gallop. I am never satisfied with the end product, but I let it go anyway. In this case I think I was trying to point out insight, so yes I would say your experience and observations fit. 🙂
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Well, whatever you in terms of your writing, it works! 😀
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Not sure how to do an aw shucks emoji so I will just say it. 🙂
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Lol! 😀
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I saw an eagle in a tree today and thought of you. It fits what you write and think of.
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Hi Tansy, what a wonderful thing to say, a compliment that I shall remember fondly today. Thank you so much.
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🙂 ❤
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So much here Daniel, I am filtering through it, finding myself under crooked tree and thinking I need to get out into the sunshine. Thank you. 🙂 ❤
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Thank you Ariel, go for it, crooked tree can throw its twisted shade somewhere else. 😉
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Thank you for your vote of confidence! 😉
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This is a wonderful piece Daniel, I am going through it word by word and finding so much to it. We all have our crooked trees.
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Hi Lauren, thank you for your comment. Indeed we all do seem to have a crooked tree somewhere, the trick maybe is how to learn from it, and lop it down. 🙂
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I like that. The lop it down part. Anything left standing needs to go. 😉
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😉
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Every word got to me on this, some of your best work in my humble opinion, and the song was to die for. ❤
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Thank you Summer, happy you liked the song, a little known artist, but great talent, I would encourage you to look up Huxlee on You Tube.
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Thank you for the referral, I went and listened to a few of her tracks. Bluegrass I suppose, very mellow voice. I liked everything I heard.
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That’s great Summer happy you liked what you heard.
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Wonderful verbiage my friend cutting edge as always!
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Thanks much my friend, wishing you a great week ahead, and from what it sounds like a break from snow in your neck of the woods. 🙂
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I thank you especially for your comment on our weather. We have had more than our share of the white stuff this year. 😦
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Beyond delightful and deep dear Daniel, a different kind of prose, I enjoyed it very much.
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Hi Ginger, happy you liked this. I always appreciate you reading and your kind comments.
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This prose means alot to me Daniel. I read it very selfishly perhaps and it spoke to where I am at in a current relationship in my life. Something I must end now, Thank you for your words of wisdom to help me do what I must do. ❤
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Thank you Danika, for sharing that with me. I wish you the best in doing what you need to do. Making those types of separations can be difficult, but I have know doubt you will have the strength to do what must be done. Shalom, Daniel
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Thank you for your words of support, that means a lot to me. Shalom to you Daniel
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I can’t just say wow because that is not me Daniel, but there is certainly that element in what you have written here.
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Thank you Carmel, I know what you mean I’m not much of a wow guy, still I very much appreciate your compliment. Have a great week ahead.
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Thank you Daniel.
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I see this as circles, both in and out of my life, everybody life, so much here Daniel, ending those things over us. I loved this. ❤
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Hi Caroline, I like what you said, circles in and out of your life, interacting intuitively. I am sure you will end what you need to in its time. 🙂
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Thanks Daniel, each day a little further out to find better a better covering than crooked tree provides. 🙂
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I am totally amazed by this Daniel, so simple in many ways but poignant and speaking to so many of us who read it.
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Thank you Deb, I like simplicity, no doubt because I am simple. 😉 I really appreciate your kind words and reading my post. Wishing you a great week ahead.
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Daniel, somehow I doubt simple, humble may be but not simple. 😉
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Love every word, and the music, is outstanding. You match each piece you write so well with music. ❤ ❤ ❤
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Thank you Diana. I was really drawn to the music, although the words for me didn’t match up there was something about the melody that did. Thank you for commenting. 🙂
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Crooked Tree is a great metaphor for the relationships so many of us hold in our lives, weather it be at a personal level or civic. This was another one my friend that was outstanding.
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Hi Lynette, I apologize for taking so long to get back to your wonderful comment. Thank you for taking the time to read my post, and comment. I am happy you liked this.
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I love the second paragraph, very Beatles like. ❤
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Hi Dawn, I am happy you liked this. I hope Paul and John would approve. 😉
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I am listening to “Crooked Tree” as I write my brother. This indeed was one of your best, at least for what it meant to me. My life under crooked tree, and yet blessed with the insight that GD has given me. I wish you blessings this week my friend. Shalom, Den
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Thank you Den. I am afraid I have fallen behind on my replies. I do apologize. As always I do appreciate you kind words to me. Wishing you a wonderful rest of the week my friend. Shalom, Daniel
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No problem Daniel, I appreciate the shout out and the wishes. I am praying your week is a blessed one as well, and wish we were nearby to celebrate Passover together. Shalom, Den
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Something old about this Daniel. Something wise and old. Very well written, the most amazing piece I have read this day actually. 🙂
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Thank you Steve, I do appreciate your wonderful compliment. My apologies for taking so long to reply.
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“Said she doubted that the crooked tree would ever change. Still she would wait another day.” This had so much on so many levels, but for me the above words stung just a little. Still it felt good. Thank you. ❤
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Thank you Abigail for such a nice comment. I do appreciate it. It seems the week has gotten away from me and I have been tardy in my replies. Hopefully the sting heals as I am sure it will, and you will be all the ever stronger. :0
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Crooked tree was one of your best yet! 🙂
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Thank you so much Palbeth, I appreciate the compliment.
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🙂 Your Welcome!!!
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Insight into our own lives, is much more difficult than it is into our neighbors it seems. Your words have alot of wisdom to them Daniel. This was well written. ❤
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Hi Erin, I agree far easier to have insight into the outer world than our own lives. Thank you for such a nice comment. My apologies for the late reply.
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❤
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Thank you! 🙂
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Adorable post
Pls do see
https://reveuse014.wordpress.com/2018/04/09/a-woman-should/
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