Mina’s back from America, sitting alone, in the dawn of the gray, her features are sharper than ever, her lips drawn back, with nothing to say. The steamer that brought her to Whitby arrived as quiet as a ghost, a gentleman’s folly for asking, what part of the journey the lady liked most. There’s changes of noticeable character, figures of dress that one should note, a spot of dried mud on satin, also her bust lines much tighter than most. Oh Mina, a matron has mentioned, your eyes have such devilish gay, says Mina, while she is still moving, at night down your body they’ll stray. A gentleman who stops by for calling, who eyed her while she was still in school, makes his visit much shorter, not sure of the discomfort, her sharp wit makes his lust a fool. He arrives his hair salt and pepper, and leaves with it so gray. His steps stumble throughout the garden, he’s heard to mumble, the woman is not so chaste.
Lucy stops by for biscuits, her flowers and dress in taste, what new fun did you find in America she whisper’s, and do I look okay? Mina plucks at an orchid, that sits tendering a tray. She brings it up to her red lips, and murmurs, tonight by the cliffs will that be okay, and oh by the way! He mentions your more than the cost of a fine gem, a singular sin in taste. He said it all in a moment, translucent as always, the case. Mina laughs as if she’s uttered a dark joke, her eyes dash down her friend’s waist. I’ll offer you more of the rest of his wants tonight, by the cliffs I can’t wait.
A shadow filled mist comes to Whitby, a steamer it moves back to sea, four glistening eyes watch from cliffs overhead, aghast at what they can’t leave. A Baphomet moment around them, immortal a spirit treatise. Mina’s back from America, the visit has sealed a found creed. – 04.12.2017 – דָּנִיֵּאל
Wow and big shiver’s!!! So this is a thing now, “The Whitby Ladies”! I love it! ❤
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Yep that’s it, hoping not to be sanctioned, and yes thank you Heather. 🙂
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Ha, you sanctioned. I should think not. More shivers I say, and soon.
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Terrifying erotic, and very good.
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Hi Diana, thank you very much. 🙂
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Welcome. ❤
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This is written very well Daniel, and I love it. 🙂
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Thank you Baily, that means a lot to me. I always like it big time when I write something people love.
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So this gave me the creeps, especially using the Salem song. I however am enamoured with the style and am hoping for more and more of the ladies.
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Hi Stephe, I am thinking you might get your wish, and thank you for your wonderful compliment.
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Wonderful, do you have names and characters yet? I must know???
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Still working on the concept, so no, not yet. 🙂
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Work fast, this stuff is great. 🙂
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Written in shadows no doubt Daniel, and really not proper, but then again I can’t hide my eyes. Well done as always my friend.
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I do that when I write this stuff, one eye open with furtive glances behind me self. 😉 Thanks for a great comment Alex.
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You truly are all dimensional. I liked Lucy, and I love Mina more. Can’t wait for what’s next.
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Thank you Dennis. I’m thinking about it, really need to get more structured about it all though.
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Mysterious, dark and chilling just as Lucy was. I love the “Ladies of Whitby” Daniel. 🙂
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Hi Ruby. Thank you. I was hoping you would like this. Wasn’t sure. 😉
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You should know by now Daniel, I love it all. 🙂 🙂 🙂
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“I’ll offer you more of the rest of his wants tonight, by the cliffs I can’t wait.” I’m hoping a preview of the future to come in this series. 😉
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Thank you Jane. I’m thinking about the next installment. Maybe next week sometime, if I don’t get taken somewhere else. 🙂
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I am already waiting for next week!!!!
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❤ This.
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Thank you Joette. 🙂
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The Gothic darkness flows through this and awakens all kinds of senses. Like so many others I am awaiting more. This was sensational!
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Thank you. I’m happy you liked this. I’m thinking about where to go with this. Any ideas?
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Your welcome, and yes my ideas I do have but I’m afraid they would never compete with yours. 😉
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I like to think you wrote this for me, a nice Easter egg to find at the most appropriate time. I love it. Tab ❤
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I actually did Tabitha 😉 Your ladies I’m thinking, and you know, you might need to make an appearance some day.
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Happy and very interested to be along for the ride with these ladies Daniel. Job well done! 🙂
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Hi Ryan. I’m right there with you my friend, viewing it all from a distance so as to speak. I’m glad you’re in the chair next to me though, not sure if Mina would do. 😉
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What a fun time we are having though, eh my friend. Please keep writing. 🙂
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Dear Mina,
Your scarf quite red will be, not flat, but fuzzy to comfort thee! Whilst you wait, be gay. Time takes many stitches from me! Our future will be oh so pretty, you’ll see!
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Could be a new design of scarf’s in the making. 😉
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